You seem really, really emotional about this, which I have to admire. Do you talk like this in person? Because I gotta tell ya, I’d be worried about whether you’d make it to the end of a sentence without passing out. Some of those sentences go on a really long ways. Also, you seem to like big words and alliteration, which is fine, everybody has their own style, but maybe you might want to simplify a little bit? Otherwise some people might think you sound kinda pompous. Not a criticism, please don’t take it the wrong way, just a comment on how you might be able to reach a broader audience. Being a lawyer and all (see, there’s an example, “a practicing attorney specializing in general commercial litigation” might strike some folks as you being a little bit impressed with yourself) you are probably used to hangin’ with people who talk like that, but sometimes you can come across better if you tone it down a stroke or two. See what I’m gettin’ at? Also, I’m not sure a fancy lawyer is what I think of as a “Traditional Tradesman,” but that’s probably just me.

Anyway, if you fix this up a bit, I’d be happy to click on the green heart for ya. ’Cause I notice you haven’t had that happen much. Nothin’ to be ashamed of, happens to everybody on Medium.

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