Pass 1: the general picture. Accusing? No, too calm; assessing and analyzing, detailing and delineating.

Pass 2: the alliteration patterns (ah, the title should be read as part of the main text — better).

Pass 3: symmetric details: “Accusations of assumptions made,/built on assumptions of accusations”; “muddy mind riddled with despair,/despairing in riddles of your own making and/misunderstanding”. And then the overall symmetry, beginning to end, but not in a forced way.

Nicely done, Tamyka.

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