Jack Herlocker
1 min readMay 8, 2024

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Just posted a story (broken into two parts because NOBODY reads an 11-min posting) dictated to me two days ago by two young ladies in my head who were excellent on dialog but skimpy on certain details; so I had to get feedback from my ex wife and her wife (which proved to be gold — my ex did a scientific analysis, her wife did a metaphor-filled description, which was weird because my ex is liberal arts and her wife is an engineer [my ex always picks engineers — I was one] ) and the story took a weird turn at the end but okay it worked and all in all I think things went very well. 😊

Up until I double-checked the post-posted stories and found I still had the draft title. 😫

And no, I don't have a better one. My muses are crap with titles. <sigh>

Maybe if I feed the story to ChatGPT... 🤔

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Jack Herlocker
Jack Herlocker

Written by Jack Herlocker

Husband & retiree. Author. Former IT geek/developer. I fill what’s empty, empty what’s full, and scratch where it itches. Occasionally do weird & goofy things.

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