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Eclipse Poem

Having someone you care for with you while the world changes around you

Jack Herlocker
Apr 10, 2024
Image by Microsoft Bing Image Creator: “silhouette of man and woman sitting side by side very close together while the sun is eclipsed by the moon above them”

Sitting in a lakeside park up north,
Hoping clouds will part
Before totality is reached.

Watching a bench with man and woman
Twenty yards in front;
Suddenly chilled from lake breeze
Plus thicker clouds and
Expanding moon over sun.

He pulls her hoodie into place
Protecting her head,
Keeping her warm;
He doesn’t need his hood
So she adjusts his collar
To return the gesture.

Clothing arranged,
They sit closer together,
Shoulders touching.

He brings up a photo
On his phone
So she rests her head next to his
While they share the moment.

Just being together
With the eclipse happening
Up there
Somewhere
Above their world.

Poetry

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Jack Herlocker
Jack Herlocker

Written by Jack Herlocker

Husband & retiree. Author. Former IT geek/developer. I fill what’s empty, empty what’s full, and scratch where it itches. Occasionally do weird & goofy things.

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