Difficult to read, Annie. Not the writing — that’s well done, very compelling, and it’s hard to stop — but the subject matter is very emotional, and the way you get inside Hannah’s head gave me a sick feeling inside. So good job on capturing this reader’s attention and imagination!

Also (and this is another #$@*! Medium thing) you might want to put “PART II” or something in either your title or subtitle. I saw the title, subtitle, and thumbnail (and I agree with you keeping the same photo) in my feed and thought it was Part 1 again (because sometimes Medium does that). Just a thought.

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