Danna, a request: can y’all go back and add a link at the end of each published stories so that a reader can go direct from #1 to #2 and on? The idea is to make it a no-brainer to jump to the next chapter. (Although the complete TOC at the beginning of each is good, too.)
I also want to make it easier for our in-house young person book expert (she reads to kids and she’s written a couple books) to read through these at one go.
What target audience do you have in mind? Would this be for kids who can read on their own, kids who get read to, a bit of both? Short chapters, one illustration at the start of each (pretty much like you have it here on Medium) or a more continuous story?
I like the overall storyline and the ending. I worry a bit that some chapters are scary, but that might be because I couldn’t immediately jump to the next (until it got posted). Different when it’s all done and together.