A Note to My Conversation Readers

“Comments and critiques are welcome” should be understood as a standing rule for (almost) anything I post (I kinda count on it)

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Nothing to do with anything, I just think it looks cool. Credit: Unsplash.

That is SO COOL! Thank you thank you thank you!

I won’t copy and paste the comments (since the point of the private notes was a private message, yes?) but some of the suggestions:

  • Don’t keep saying that Jack loves Deb*** or Deb loves Jack. It’s obvious from actions and other words.
  • Side comments or explanations are good, when they enhance the story. Again, simple is better.

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Husband & retiree. Developer, tech writer, & IT geek. I fill what’s empty, empty what’s full, and scratch where it itches. Occasionally do weird & goofy things.

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